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  • Spinster's Folly by Marsha Ward

    Spinster's Folly by Marsha Ward

    Today is a real treat :) I have Marsha Ward here today to talk a little about herself, how she writes, why she writes, and if she's a pantser or a planner... How did you become interested in the Civil War?
    Author Robert Newton Peck once said that every historical writer has their favorite war. While his was the French and Indian War, mine turned out to be the Civil War. I don’t know what sparked my passion for it. It could have been reading some of historian Bruce Catton’s work, or Gone With the Wind, during high school. My interest certainly did not stem from a personal or family issue, since none of my relatives fought on either side. If they had, they’ve have been Union soldiers, and my characters fought for the South.
    That said, my current novels actually have post-Civil War settings, dealing with the aftermath of that great struggle, so they fit more in the classification of Western Migration novels, or Settling of the West.
    Very cool. Tell us about your novels.
    The Man from Shenandoahbegins as Carl Owen returns from the Civil War to find the family farm destroyed, his favorite brother dead, food scarce, and his father determined to leave the Shenandoah Valley to build a cattle empire in Colorado Territory. Crossing the continent, Carl falls in love with his brother's fiancée while set to wed another girl, but he might lose everything if the murderous outlaw Berto Acosta has his way. Carl battles a band of outlaws, a prairie fire, blizzards, a trackless waterless desert, and his own brother-all for the hand of feisty Ellen Bates.
    Ride to Ratoncontinues from there: after losing the heart of his fiancée to his brother, James Owen leaves home to make a new life for himself. The turbulent world of post-Civil War Colorado Territoryis fraught with danger and prejudice that increase his bitter loneliness as personal setbacks threaten to break him. Then James's journey brings him into contact with another wayfarer, beautiful young Amparo Garcés, who has come from Santa Fe to Colorado to marry a stranger. Through a twist of fate, their futures are changed forever when their lives are merged in a marriage of convenience. James and Amparo undertake a hazardous horseback trek over Raton Passto Santa Fe, battling their personal demons, a challenging language barrier, and winter's raging storms.
    My third novel, Trail of Storms, goes back to tell the tale of a peripheral character from the first novel. Jessie Bingham and her family flee post-Civil War Virginia after her sister suffers a brutal attack, and together endure a perilous trek to New Mexico Territory. When she hears her former sweetheart, James Owen, has taken a wife, Jessie accepts Ned Heizer’s marriage proposal on the condition they wait until journey’s end to wed. But then Jessie encounters James again... and he isn’t married now!
    Spinster’s Follyis the fourth book in the series, and tells Marie Owen’s story. Marie lives in a land that is long on rough characters and short on fitting suitors. Her desire to get married before she winds up a spinster propels her into making hasty decisions that drive her into the arms of a sweet-talking predator, landing her in unimaginable dangers.
    Wow, all of those books sound like they would be great reads. How much research was necessary to make your books so historically believable and where did you conduct most of your research? Did you visit the locations where you set your novels?
    I read 150 books to research my first novel. Some I bought, but most came from the library. Over the years that I’ve been writing the series, I have been able to do some on-the-ground research, and I recently took a trip back East to visit Civil War battlefields and other areas in preparation to write my next book. I’ve also been amassing books on the Civil War in the last year. Lots of books!
    In the earlier years, I conducted several interviews with people familiar with the areas I wanted to learn about. Photographs were also helpful, as were the state guides produced as WPA projects during the Great Depression. I’ve found several very good online sources for research on my later books.
    Are you a pantser or a planner when you write?
    I definitely write by the seat of my pants, once I have an idea for a story and know who my characters will be. I’m doing more planning now than I used to, though, so I don’t spend way too much time rewriting. However, I’ll never again write a complete synopsis early-on. That doesn’t work for me, because my brain then thinks I’ve already written the book.
    While I’m writing, I make various charts and spreadsheets to help me analyze the number of occurrances of different points-of-view, and events within scenes. This helps the revision process goes faster.
    I now use a great writing software program called yWriter5, which allows me to focus on one scene at a time. This is important, so that I don’t become daunted by the vastness of the project. A huge upside to using it is that the software is free!
    I'm a writer too, so I like to ask other writers. 'What's your writing schedule like?'
    Very fragmented. I’m easily distracted, but when I’m white-hot in the initial draft, I can write for up to eight hours, broken up by short breaks. This is only possible because I live alone.
    I wish I had a better schedule. Almost every writer I know wishes the same thing!

    I know I do lol... actually, I wish my fingers and eyelids kept up with my brain lol. Have you held a "day job" in addition to your writing?
    Yes. Through the years I mothered my children, and then worked as a journalist, an educator, and in a retail store. I’ve also volunteered with several organizations, doing websites, newsletters, and a multitude of other chores.

    Something I'm always curious about... How do you promote your books?
    I have a website and a couple of blogs, I’m active on Facebook and other social media venues, and I’m always looking for ways to let people know I’m an author, such as giving talks and networking with various groups. I find that word of mouth from enthusiastic readers drives the most sales, though.

    Advice to anyone contemplating writing a Civil War novel?
    Do thorough research, keep accessible notes, then let the fingers loose.

    Finally, How would you like to be remembered?
    As a kind person who could write a little.
    Thank you so much, Marsha, for being on my blog today... and HAPPY RELEASE DAY!!!!!!

    ~*~*~*~*~

    Book Release Party Nov. 10

    (I love that book cover!!)
    What exactly is Spinster's Folly? Marie Owen yearns for a loving husband, but Colorado Territory is long on rough characters and short on fitting suitors, so a future of spinsterhood seems more likely than wedded bliss. Her best friend says cowboy Bill Henry is a likely candidate, but Marie knows her class-conscious father would not allow such a pairing. When she challenges her father to find her a suitable husband before she becomes a spinster, he arranges a match with a neighbor's son. Then Marie discovers Tom Morgan would be an unloving, abusive mate and his mother holds a grudge against the Owen family. Marie's mounting despair at the prospect of being trapped in such a dismal marriage drives her into the arms of a sweet-talking predator, landing her in unimaginable dangers. This fourth book in the Owen Family Saga is infused with potent heart and intense grit.

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    Marsha Ward is an award-winning writer and editor who has published over 900 pieces of work, including three previous novels in the Owen Family Saga, numerous newspaper articles, and sections in books on the craft of writing. She is a member of Western Writers of America, Women Writing the West, and American Night Writers Association. Born a while ago in the sleepy little town of Phoenix, Arizona, Marsha grew up with chickens, citrus trees, and lots of room to roam. She began telling stories at a very early age, regaling neighborhood chums with her tales as they snacked on her homemade sugar cookies and drank cold milk. Visiting her cousins on their ranch and listening to her father's stories of homesteading in Old Mexico and in the Tucson area reinforced Marsha's love of 19th Century Western history. After many years in the big city, Marsha now makes her home in a tiny hamlet under Central Arizona's magnificent Mogollon Rim. When she is not writing, she loves to spoil her grandchildren, travel, give talks, meet readers, and sign books. Here are links to my author pages at Smashwords and Amazon: https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/marshaward
    http://www.amazon.com/Marsha-Ward/e/B003RB9P9Q/ And links to my Social Media sites: Website: http://marshaward.com
    Author Blog: http://marshaward.blogspot.com
    Character Blog: http://charactersinmarshashead.blogspot.com
    Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/authormarshaward
    Twitter: http://twitter.com/MarshaWard Online Book Release Event at Facebook:
    https://www.facebook.com/events/333393153425853/

  • B90 Check-In~ Week 6

    Another week has come and gone!
    And we keep marking books off left and right.
    If you are with the B90 schedule, you should have already read through:
    Genesis
    Exodus
    Leviticus
    Numbers
    Deuteronomy
    Joshua
    Judges
    Ruth
    1 Samuel
    2 Samuel
    1 Kings
    2 Kings
    1 Chronicles
    2 Chronicles
    Ezra
    Nehemiah
    16 books already! And we are only on day 35.
    WAY TO GO!!
    And if you are behind, don't worry about it. Just read as much as you can each day. Read whenever you get a chance. The point is to finish :)
    Nehemiah was the last of the history books (which I'm kinda sad about.) Next, we have Esther (which never mentions God by name, but you can definitely see Him in there). Then, we will get to Job (poor guy.)
    If you don't like history, I know you are glad to be finished with those books. CONGRATULATIONS for sticking to it!!!
    If you are like me and loved them, it'll be ok. You can always re-read them later ;)

    Next week's readings are:
    Monday (day 36): Ne. 13:15- Job 7:21 Tuesday (day 37): Job 8:1- Job 24:25 Wednesday (day 38): Job 25:1 - Job 41:34 Thursday (day 39): Job 42:1 - Ps. 24:10 Friday (day 40): Ps 25:1- Ps. 45:14 Saturday (day 41): Ps. 45:15 - Ps. 69:21 Sunday (day 42): Ps. 69:22 - Ps 89:13

    Don't forget to post your weekly check-ins in the comments section.
    Let me know what you are finding interesting in this reading... and how you are progressing. Don't be shy :)
    Much Love,
    ~Kelly 

  • Sweet Saturday Sample-- Ray and Sloan chit-chat

    Sweet Saturday Sample-- Ray and Sloan chit-chat

    This is a snippet from my new book, SAINT SLOAN, available now :)

    Saint Sloan

    Sloan wanted to go home and pretend the day hadn’t
    happened. If history taught her anything, she knew Mackenzie
    wouldn’t stay upset forever. Still, though, it wasn’t the way she had
    planned on ending her seventeenth year.
    “Is this seat taken?”

    Sloan looked up and saw Ray looking down at her with his
    tray in his hands. He’d gotten the chicken and salad as well. “Yeah,
    that’s fine. I don’t think Mackenzie is coming back.”

    “Mackenzie? Mackenzie Woodard? Wasn’t she in our
    kindergarten class?”

    “One and the same. My one and only friend who can’t seem
    to stand talking to me right now. Can’t really blame her.”

    Ray sat down and took a sip of his soft drink. “You seem to
    have that effect on people.”

    “Tell me about it.” She sighed with her head resting on her
    hand. “I can’t seem to say anything right today.”

    “Well, third time’s a charm. Try talking to me.”

    As appealing as having a conversation with Ray sounded,
    she didn’t know if she should with the roll she was on. “I don’t
    know. It appears I’m dangerous and can’t be trusted with words.”

    “I don’t mind. I’m used to it. Aaron can’t be trusted with
    words either.”

    She had a feeling he wasn’t wrong Her mind swimming
    with questions, Sloan wanted to ask him why he was really back
    and why he’d left in the first place. She wanted to ask more about
    his mother and Aaron, who she owed big time for taking her home.
    But instead she pushed her salad around her plate.

    “I take it your day hasn’t gotten any better,” he said, his
    deep blue eyes locked on her. Sloan wished she knew the secrets
    behind them; then again, maybe she didn’t want to know. She
    definitely had plenty of skeletons in her own closet.

    “Not much, and I hate it because I have nothing to be upset
    over. I woke up this morning, I’m able to go to school, and
    tomorrow’s my birthday. But there’s something about today that
    just feels wrong. I feel wrong.” Sloan didn’t have a piece of lettuce
    on her plate that hadn’t been scooted to the other side, yet she
    hadn’t taken a bite.

    “Maybe Darcy’s starting to get to you.”

    “Maybe a lot of people are.”

    He pointed with his fork to the football table. “That guy with
    her is looking at you.”

    Sloan looked and saw Ray was right. “That’s Boyd,” she said
    as she pivoted back to face Ray. “My ex.”

    “Fun.”

    “Always.”

    BUY LINKS:
    AMAZON
    BARNES and NOBLE
    ASTRAEA PRESS
    ALL ROMANCE

  • My Issues with 'The Vampire Diaries'

    Let me preface this by saying, I'm not coming at this from a 'Christian' perspective-- well, I'm trying not too. While nothing on this show screams, "Christian values" (it's about vampires after all... ), it's not what is bothering me about it recently.
    And I'm not judging you if you watch it. I've never missed an episode-- I just need to get some thoughts out. So...
    ****************
    I started watching The Vampire Diaries on the CW in summer of 2010. I was hooked on the first episode. Vampire brothers, Damon and Stefan, move back to Mystic Falls, Va. Stefan falls for 'good girl', Elena, who is identical to his first love, and fellow vampire, Katherine (turns out Elena is Katherine's doppelganger... who knew?)
    Damon hates Stefan for turning him and promises to make 'an eternity of misery for you'-- and does-- however, in the end, the brothers' love for each other saves them from many situations.
    Other characters include: Bonnie: The Bennett witch Caroline: the Newbie Vampire/Head Cheerleader Tyler: Werewolf (now wolf-vampire hybrid) Jeremy: Elena's brother-- likes the drugs-- sees dead people Alaric: History teacher by day-- vampire hunter by night-- Damon's best friend. Matt: Human-- Klaus: One of the original vamps. He was the big bad until his mommy came back from the dead. Elijah: Klaus' brother. Rebecca: Their sister
    If you get the point, I've watched this show for a while lol.
    Then a few months ago, something changed, and I started seeing things in the show that I didn't like. Sure, I'm 31 and not the target audience, but my kids are getting to the age where they are going to watch this stuff. I started watching as a MOMMY and not a FAN GIRL (which does take some of the fun away if I'm going to be honest)
    And I KNOW this goes on on a lot of teen shows-- I get that. This is just one I happen to watch.
    Problem the first: Damon is always drinking! Not blood either. When he gets mad, he drinks. When he is happy, he drinks. When it's 8 am, he drinks. What a great way to show teens how to deal with their problems...
    Problem the second: No one ever stays dead-- Every character (EVERY CHARACTER) has died at least once. Yet, we still have a show because everyone (well most everyone, some stay dead) comes back. What is the point of a show when there is no consequences for dying? And what does that show about death?
    Problem the third: Underaged drinking. Even the 'good girl' drinks. Everyone drinks. Can there be ONE character that doesn't? IN real life, does everyone drink? I might be sheltered here. I never drank anything until I was 22 or 23. I'm not saying make a big deal about it, but maybe give us one person who isn't hung up on the liquor.
    Problem the forth (and one of the main issues I have): Damon's controlling attitude and how he lashes out at Elena when he's mad. I GET IT... Damon is a vampire. They aren't moral by nature. But human girls watch it-- human girls with real life boyfriends. On the show, the first time Elena told Damon she didn't love him-- he broke her brother's neck (but as we have established, he didn't die forever, because.. well.. you get the point).
    The second time she told him his loving her was a problem, he snapped someone's neck (he didn't die either) and then he slept with Rebecca (who is trying to kill Elena-- for literally stabbing her in the back).
    And what gets me (and it might be because I'm old) I've read posts from girls who defend his actions because he's "hurt" or "a bad guy" or "he's just so sexy".

    Yeah-- cause that's the message we need to send kids. "Hey girls, it's ok if a guy goes all nuts when you tell him you don't love him and hurts people because of it."

    If you are still reading, bless you. I've loved this show for years (hangs head sadly)-- and after Thursday's episode, I've erased all of my DVRs and cut it from my schedule. God has really been dealing with me about this show-- even to the point where I was hiding it from my husband lol... I know.. I know.

    IF your kids watch it, I'm not telling you to make them stop. What I am saying is that you need to watch it with them. Talk to them while you are watching it. Explain things you don't like and talk about ways you can deal with anger appropriately. Use it to talk to your kids-- there are lots of good talks you can have about the show.

    I basically used 'The Vampire Diaries' as an example here because it's a show I've watched for years and I know the ins and outs... there are so many other shows that could fit into this post.

    And if you get convicted to stop watching... stop. I fought it for months (it was my addiction-- I know, some addiction lol).

    Do you have any shows that you watch that you feel like you shouldn't (for whatever reason: moral, emotional, etc.)? How do you deal with it? Do you watch the same shows your kids do? How do you talk to them while you are watching it?

    How do you feel about TV shows in general?

    Much Love,
    Kelly (who is an old fuddy duddy;) )

  • Jennifer Comeaux, Gorgeous Covers, and a giveaway!!!

    Jennifer Comeaux, Gorgeous Covers, and a giveaway!!!

    I'm so excited to have Jennifer Comeaux here today and learn about the second in her Edge novels, Edge of the Past (Astraea Press, Nov. 2012)
    Edge of the Past is the sequel to Life on the Edge-- I'll give you the book covers to see if you can figure out what these books are about...

    Life On the Edge by Jennifer Comeaux
    Edge of the Past by Jennifer Comeaux

    BUY LINKS FOR EDGE OF THE PAST:
    AMAZON
    BARNES AND NOBLE
    SMASHWORDS

    Hmmm... do you sense the theme?

    (And aren't these AWESOME book covers! Seriously, gorgeous!)

    Life on the Edge and Edge of the Past are New Adult novels, a very big upcoming genre in literature between young adult (12ish-18ish) and adult (over college age... ish).

    And do you have to like skating to like these books? Well, did you have to know how to do surgery to watch ER or drink blood to watch the Vampire Diaries (ewwww)?

    So, what is Edge of the Past about...

    Emily’s skating career and personal life have never been more golden. She and her partner Chris have won every competition they’ve entered this season, and she’s found the man of her dreams in her coach Sergei. But when one of the biggest competitions of the year takes Emily and Sergei to Russia, Sergei’s past explodes into the present and makes Emily doubt everything in their future.

    And what's reading the second book before you read the first one? It's like watching The Bourne Legacy without seeing the Bourne Identity or Return of the Jedi before they ever went away...
    FREE BOOK ALERT!!!!
    Jennifer wants to help you with that. She has agreed to give away 1 ebook copy of LIFE ON THE EDGE (Edge, #1) to a reader of this blog (You my friends... you! And is there anything better than free??????)
    All you have to do to win is leave a blog comment telling me which book cover you like the best: Life on the the Edge or Edge of the Past.

    Personally, I'm all about the second one because purple is my favorite color... I need to make this blog purple (but I digress)

    THE WINNER WILL BE RANDOMLY CHOSEN FROM THE BLOG COMMENT PARTICIPANTS. NO PURCHASE NECESSARY. CONTEST ENDS AT 7 AM MONDAY, FEB. 18th.

    GOOD LUCK!!! This is definitely a book you want to win!

    Wanna know what book 1 is about????

    Nineteen-year-old Emily is new to pairs skating, but she and her partner Chris have a big dream–to be the first American team to win Olympic gold. Their young coach Sergei, who left Russia after a mysterious end to his skating career, believes they can break through and make history. Emily and Chris are on track to be top contenders at the 2002 Winter Games. But when forbidden feelings spark between Emily and Sergei, broken trust and an unexpected enemy threaten to derail Emily’s dreams of gold.

    And here is an excerpt from EDGE OF THE PAST...

    Excerpt
    Sergei pressed me up into the star lift, and I noticed some of the other skaters idling and watching us. We sped past them, and Sergei set me down, preparing for the closing seconds of the program.
    In time with the final piano notes, I edged away from Sergei, and he rushed toward me, trapping me in his arms for the ending pose. I gasped at the passion with which he grabbed me. His eyes held my gaze then slowly drifted down to my mouth, and my body hummed from the fiery energy between us. I leaned into his chest and squeezed my fingers harder around his biceps.
    A few of my training mates erupted with applause and whistles, and Sergei jerked backward. He didn’t say anything as he took off to cool down, leaving me alone in the middle of the ice with more than my muscles burning.

    Jennifer Comeaux

    About the Author
    Jennifer Comeaux earned a Master of Accounting from Tulane University and is a Certified Public Accountant in south Louisiana. While working in the corporate world, she sought a creative outlet and decided to put on paper a story that had played in her head for years. That story became Life on the Edge, her first published novel. When not working or writing, she is an avid follower of the sport of figure skating, travelling to competitions around the country. Those experiences allow her to see a different side of the sport and serve as an inspiration for her writing. Jennifer is blessed with a wonderful family and friends who have encouraged her to pursue her dream of being a published author.
    Author social media links:
    Website
    Twitter
    Facebook
    Goodreads

  • "What is Love?" Bible Study: Week 12

    "What is Love?
    A Bible Study
    Week 12
    "The End"
    Verse for the week:
    1 Corinthians 13:13 Three things will last forever: faith, hope, and love-- and the greatest of these is love.
    *********************** Well, friends, we made it!
    Not only is this the last week of the 12 week 'Love' Bible Study, but it is also my 200th post on this blog! Kinda poetic somehow that it occured at the same time. :)
    For the past 12 weeks, we have had one mission in this Bible Study, to determine "What is Love?"
    We have looked at it from lots of angles. I'm sure there are hundreds more we could consider, but I won't. These past 12 weeks have been what I felt God wanted me to share with you :) The good, the bad, and the ugly.
    We have one more verse to look at before we close the book (so to speak) on this study.
    1 Corinthians 13:13-- "Three things will last forever: faith, hope, and love-- and the greatest of these is love.
    Your love will never die!
    Want to make a difference in the world? Statues of famous people, monuments, they all crumble. People forget what they did. They have no idea who they ever were. But love, showing love, that lasts an eternity. One act of kindness from you can change a life... that can change another life, and so on.
    It will live on generation after generation through the people you love now.
    The people you help...
    The people you encourage...
    The people you love...
    That will never go away.
    Do you realize you are changing history? Right now, at this very minute, you are affecting the outcome of someone else's life. Some changes are big. Some are small. Some are good. Some are bad. But everything you do affects someone in some way.
    Examples: *Buying a Gideon Bible could be the very one placed that helps someone on the brink of suicide decide they have something to live for.
    *Giving food to the needy/food drive can cause someone to think, "Maybe there IS still goodness in the world."
    *Chosing to talk to a friend about God can result in them being saved (even if it's not in your lifetime.)
    You choices change lives.
    That goes for the negative along with the postive, unfortunately.
    Examples of that would be: *Gossiping can cause a sinner to think, "I'm no worse than she is. Why do I need God?"
    *Hate for another person can keep us from telling them about Jesus which could seriously affect their future.
    *A poor decision (drinking and driving) can affect so many lives.
    We think we are all tiny, insignificant people in this vast sea of ever changing humanity. Once we are gone, we figure we will be forgottena bout.
    But our legacy of love never dies.
    If we only helped one person and that person helped someone else--- after a while everyone would be helped causing love to grow.
    And your charity, faithfullness, and love for God planted the seed.
    One hundred years from now, your name might not be remembered, but the effects of your love will stil be going strong-- like a never-ending, far reaching wave.
    Notebook Question: What are some ways you are spreading love? What ways can you think of that you could do more?
    12 weeks ago, we started out to answer the simple question "What is love?"
    Well, here is the answer: Love is simply one thing. Love is the outbpouring of your heart for the wellbeing of another person.
    Notebook Question: How do you define love?
    People won't always treat us right and we will feel down. There is always some injustice in the world (or in our community).
    We can't change the wrongs in the world-- but we can-- through love-- create positives to counteract them.
    Faith/hope/love will endure forever.
    You, with God's help, have the power to change lives.
    How can we show love? Simple (1 Cor. 13:1-13) *Be patient *Be kind *Don't be jealous *Don't boast *Don't be rude *Don't be demanding *Don't be iriatable *Don't keep a record of being wronged *Don't rejoice in injustice. *Never give up *Never lose faith *Always be hopeful *Endure through everything.
    A tall order to be sure.
    Will we be perfect? Nope.
    But thankfully we serve One who is-- One who lives in our heart and helps us love others like he did.
    I'd love to close this Bible Study with one of the greatest acts of love ever committed.
    John 3:16-- "For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son. That whosoever believeth in him should not perish-- but have everlasting life."
    God Bless You, and thank you So much for taking the time to do this bible study. If it has helped you in any way or if you have any questions, I'd love to hear from you.
    Kelly

  • Writing Kickass Action Scenes: Part Two

    Writing Kickass Action Scenes: Part Two

    I’d like to welcome back S.J Kincaid, author of the upcoming YA dystopian novel for boys, Insignia.

    If you missed part one of her post on writing action scene, click here. Her analysis is based on the book Watership Down.

    <<<3

    BIGWIG AND WOUNDWORT, AND THEIR VERY PERSONAL HISTORY:
    Bigwig infiltrated General Woundwort's frightening warren. Woundwort was impressed by his size and his ferocity, so he imbued Bigwig with some measure of authority. When Bigwig helped a number of rabbits escape Efrafra, and his loyalty to Woundwort was revealed as a ruse, this was more than a heist-- it was a personal betrayal of Woundwort. When Woundwort and his rabbits close in on Watership Down, he's determined above all to exact revenge on the traitorous Bigwig. There is serious bad blood between these two rabbits.

    THE STAKES OF THIS BATTLE:
    By the time Bigwig faces down Woundwort, the very survival of Watership Down is at stake. They are in the middle of a battle for their very existence. Their free warren is the last bulwark against Woundwort's fascist, rabbity empire, and the entire battle comes down to whether Bigwig can hold a critical tunnel for his side. Bigwig believes even his dead body will block the run long enough to save the day-- as long as he doesn't let the larger General Woundwort shove him backward out of the tunnel. These are the highest stakes you'll ever get here.

    CLEVERNESS/SURPRISES DURING THE FIGHT:
    I can't recall off the top of my head whether the reader is in on this or not, but Bigwig knows Woundwort is too large to take in an open fight. So he plants himself in a critical tunnel, where Woundwort won't have room to navigate, and buries himself in the dirt. Woundwort starts down the tunnel, certain he's about to win the day, and then out springs Bigwig, taking the clever General by surprise. Clever tactics are employed, surprises are there, and these all hold my attention as a reader.

    HIGH EMOTIONS:
    There are many instances of this in the battle. This fight is the climax in the Bigwig/Woundwort relationship. Woundwort, more fearsome, cannot overcome Bigwig, who fights out of sheer conviction. Bigwig is determined to die if he must, and Woundwort's bloodlust shifts to a dawning realization he may not win a battle against a rabbit as determined and ferocious as Bigwig, even if he is larger and stronger than Bigwig by far.

    There are other small aspects that are extremely well done. In one moment, Woundwort, faced with the first true challenge of his life, demands to know why Bigwig won't just surrender. He offers him his life. Bigwig refuses and informs him 'his chief rabbit' has ordered him to hold this tunnel. This is when we get one of the most satisfying moments of the book: the invincible General Woundwort feels a moment of true fear. We find out he’s always assumed Bigwig was chief rabbit of his warren, and now he envisions a 'terrible chief rabbit' lurking in the tunnels somewhere who is larger and stronger than Bigwig. (We, the readers, know that the chief rabbit, Hazel, is smaller than Bigwig, and has a lame foot, to boot. In fact, General Woundwort had already seen him, and dismissed him without a second thought as insignificant. That's why it's fun to be in on a secret.) Until now, we have only seen Woundwort as a terrible tyrant feared by all. In this particularly striking moment, we get to see Woundwort experience his first true doubt, and it’s wonderful to read.

    These emotions throughout the battle, the moments large and small, keep a reader hanging on every word.

    <<<3

    Part three (the final part) will be posted on Monday.

  • On My Writerly Bookshelf: Symbolism

    On My Writerly Bookshelf: Symbolism

    On Monday, I talked about weaving symbolism into your story. No matter how small the detail, symbolism can enrich your writing.

    In the post, I mentioned the book Symbols, Images, and Codes: The Secret Language of Meaning in Film, TV, Games, and Visual Media by Pamela Jaye Smith. I recently discovered this book and love it. If you’re looking for a deep book on the meaning of symbolism in our culture (or anything along this line), this book isn’t it. If you’re looking for a reference book to help you pull more symbolism into your story, this is what you’re looking for. Or at least it’s a good starting point.

    Pamela divides the book into twenty-three categories. These include:

    Astronomy and Astrology
    Composition (i.e. the concept photographers, cinematographers, artists consider, and you will too after reading this section)
    Numbers
    Codes
    Earth
    Air
    Fire
    Water
    Animals
    Color
    Anatomy
    Clothes
    Architecture

    The book begins with a brief introduction on how symbols, images, and codes work. Each chapter (category) is then broken down according to:

    • What the symbol means. For example, air means freedom, spirit, superhuman power, and understanding.
    • How it’s been used in history, myth, and contemporary times.
    • Examples found in movies, along with explanations as to how it worked in the movie.
    • How to use it in your story. There are all kinds of cool ideas listed. Some are more appropriate for certain stories verses others.
    • Written descriptions. Words that are great for creating powerful prose and imagery.
    • Cinematic techniques. Not relevant to most of us, but this section is really cool too.
    At the end of the book is a section that lists different emotions, situations, and concepts, and provides a list from the above categories that are applicable to each. You select the symbol that will have the most power at that point in your story. Remember, some will speak to your reader at a conscious level, and other will speak to them at the unconscious one.

    No matter what genre you write, this book is a great resource.

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    If you want to know more about writing symbolism in fiction, I have a very special guest post coming up in a few weeks. This author KNOWS about symbolism.

    (How’s that for suspense?)

  • Gone at Fifteen

    Gone at Fifteen

    Ah, my dream scenario. I’m sitting in my grade twelve history class, listening to my teacher drone on about who knows what, and suddenly he vanishes. Poof. Gone. Oh, wait. Since I skipped most of my grade twelve history course—hence why I had to repeat it (hint, hint)—this might not have been such a big deal. But this is exactly how the teen Sci-fi novel, Gone, by Michael Grant begins.

    One minute the citizens of Perdido Beach, California are immersed in their normal day-to-day existence; the next minute everyone fifteen years and older vanishes, leaving chaos in their wake. Stoves are left on. Cars are still running. Babies and young children are abandoned. And almost everyone turns to Sam Temple for leadership, a role the fourteen-year-old doesn’t want.

    But Sam’s problems escalate when Caine Soren—a charismatic student from Coate’s Academy, a school for troubled youth—rallies together the town bullies. This begins the typical battle between good and bad.

    As Sam and his friends struggle to survive in an isolated world without adults, they desperately search for answers to their bewildering questions: What caused the sleepy town of Perdido Beach to become the FAYZ—Fallout Alley Youth Zone? What happens when you fade away the minute you turn fifteen—is it a good or a bad thing? And, can they prevent it from happening if they so choose?

    This gripping novel surges with twists and turns—and a little romance—that hook you from page one. Although the story flows from numerous points of view, Sam clearly remains the main character. And it becomes obvious from the beginning he harbors a secret that is vital to their survival. The truth also raises new questions. Naturally, you crave to keep reading to discover the answers.

    Because you journey inside the head of a number of characters, you learn what motivates them to behave as they do. The multiple points of view also help prevent holes in the plot. The story would have been sadly lacking—and a lot shorter—if it had only been told from Sam’s point of view. The other advantage is that the characters all seem real. Any one of them could easily be someone you know. Well, almost someone you know. You’ll have to read the book to figure out what I mean.

    I’ll admit, I’m not a big fan of Sci-fi—though I loved Stephenie Meyer’s The Host—but I thoroughly enjoyed Michael Grant’s Gone, and can’t wait for the sequel. I only hope I don’t have to wait too long, especially since the series is supposed to contain six books (groan!).

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