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  • How I Find Time to Write by Zanna Mackenzie (author of How Do You Spell Love?)

    How I Find Time to Write by Zanna Mackenzie (author of How Do You Spell Love?)

    The final installment of 'How I Find Time to Write' is written by the wonderful Zanna Mackenzie! I'm so excited to have her tell you the tricks she uses to write her novels. She also has some excerpts from her new book How Do You Spell Love?

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    Finding the time to escape into whatever book you’re currently writing can be a tricky business for an author. I’m fortunate in being self-employed, though contracted to work a set amount of hours per week I have plenty of flexibility re when I do work those hours. My day job is also writing related – another plus – as I’m the editor of some business publications for a chamber of commerce. I work from home too, which I love and which saves me having to spend time doing lengthy commutes each day – another positive!
    I’ve recently had two novels published by different publishers within the space of a month and have quickly discovered that all of the required promotional activity and social media ‘presence’ is very time consuming, far more than I had anticipated.
    All of which means finding the time to edit my next book (I’ve recently completed the first draft of it) and working on the scenes/plot/characters of the book I have outlined for after that is becoming more and more of a challenge.
    Don’t get me wrong, I’m delighted to have my work published and relish learning all about the promotional aspects of being an author, but as my writing time has now been squeezed considerably I’m having to be more creative about finding time to write and my solution is – write in bed!!
    My husband is one of those people who is always awake at about 5am and gets up to do the ‘early morning shift’ in our household - so I have a notebook by the bed and let my mind start working on scenes and dialogue as soon as I wake up and then I start writing them all up ready to be typed onto the computer in the appropriate slot in the working manuscript document whenever I get chance.
    I’ve found that I prefer writing in this way rather than sitting in front of the computer and writing straight onto it whilst in ‘the creative zone’.
    As the ‘boss’ at my day job doesn’t work on Fridays I try as much as I can to make Fridays my writing day – providing I don’t have design or proof reading deadlines for the business publications – and aim to keep promotion and social media to a minimum then as well so that I can get typing up all those scene notes.
    I currently have about 50 pages of notes to type up though – so this plan doesn’t always work!

    Many thanks for hosting me on your blog today Kelly!
    My latest novel, published by Crooked Cat, is called How Do You Spell Love? Here’s the details:


    Make A Wish…
    Kat can’t help wishing there was more to life than this. What happened to her dream job? What happened with Nathan?
    Summer is wondering where her life is going too… battling the developers of a controversial housing estate and working out why boyfriend Rob is increasingly distant.
    When the developers win the battle and move into town everyone’s life is turned upside down.
    Kat meets building site project manager Alex. She enjoys his company far too much, even though he’s on the town’s most hated list.
    Summer meets Tom who has plenty of relationship troubles of his own, so things could get really complicated.
    Soon everyone is keeping secrets, lives change and hearts are broken. Is everything falling apart, or does life just work in mysterious ways…

    There’s a sneak peak of the book below and it can be purchased in paperback and ebook formats now on:
    *Crooked Cat Publishing
    http://www.crookedcatbooks.com/
    *Amazon UK
    http://www.amazon.co.uk/How-Do-You-Spell-Love/dp/1908910771/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1361800360&sr=8-2
    *Amazon USA
    http://www.amazon.com/How-Do-You-Spell-Love/dp/1908910771/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1361800417&sr=1-3&keywords=zanna+mackenzie

    Extract from How Do You Spell Love?
    Kat pushed the last of the cottage cheese and shrimp sandwiches into the cool box and slammed the van door shut. As if her life wasn’t enough of a disaster zone as it was – no money, lousy job, losing Nathan, having to move back home to live with her parents – now this had to go and happen. Plus, of course, it didn’t help that today she was feeling shattered after spending half the night chanting some ridiculous protection spell in the middle of the allotments with Summer.
    Cringing as a van full of builders stopped at the nearby traffic lights, Kat braced herself for the inevitable. After the standard-issue wolf whistles had drifted across from their van, next came the leered, “Wouldn’t argue with that, love!” as one of them nodded towards her sparkling clean van, parked neatly at the curb. The words “A Bit of Crumpet on the Road” emblazoned down the side in deep purple, glittery lettering. Not for the first time Kat cursed her boss Janice for calling her bakery-cum-deli that name.
    Kat sighed, well it certainly drew comments from the public and from their customers, not always welcome ones, but as Janice was always keen to point out, any kind of publicity and attention was, in her eyes, good publicity and attention.
    Pulling her navy and white striped apron more tightly around her T-shirt and shorts, Kat ignored the builders and climbed into her van to begin that morning’s deliveries. As she indicated to pull out into the busy street in Luisborough, she mulled over the bad news – that she was to add the controversial Netherton Meadows housing development to her daily sandwich round.
    Netherton Meadows. Yippee. If Summer found out, she’d surely be ostracised for fraternising with the environmental enemy. This was a development that pretty much everyone in Luisborough had fought against for getting on towards a year. It had been the focus of STW campaigns. It went against everything that Kat believed in environmental-wise. Everyone hated the Netherton Meadows developers. Except, it seemed, Janice, who was perfectly happy to, in her words, ‘supply yummy builders with yummy sandwiches.’
    Lost in thought, Kat just managed to spot the approaching traffic lights had turned to red and hastily slammed a foot on the brake. The van lurched to a halt and several boxes of crisps and one of the cool boxes in the back tipped over. Damn. It was shaping up to be one of those days.
    Ten minutes later she pulled into the car park of Printing Phenomenon, hauled some baskets and a box from the van and headed for the reception area. It was getting towards late July and was another one of those blazing hot days that made every little thing feel as though it required a huge amount of effort. The kind of day the people of the UK are so unaccustomed to, where all you want to do is get a large, cool drink and collapse into a deckchair for a long snooze.
    Two hours later Kat had visited all her usual drops, was extremely hot and bothered, and could put off going to Netherton Meadows no longer.
    Driving through the assorted vans, machinery and portacabins Kat parked next to a building marked as being the Site Office and hit the button on the dashboard. Tinkling chimes filled the air as Kat climbed from the driver’s seat and made to open the back doors of the vehicle. It was embarrassing enough that the van had the company name in large lettering along its side but, just to make sure that it received maximum exposure – and achieved maximum embarrassment – Janice had had some irritating chimes fitted to the vehicle too. Kat was under strict instructions to sound the chimes when she called at all of the sites where people came out to the van; such as they were about to at Netherton Meadows.
    A man came down the steps of the office with a grin on his face and walked towards her. “Hi, you must be Kat.” He wedged a clipboard under his left arm and offered a hand to shake. “I’m Alex. Project manager for the site.”
    “Hi,” mumbled Kat, spotting a group of hard-hat-clad builders advancing towards her with hungry expressions on their faces.
    “Right, lads,” Alex turned towards the men. “This is Kat and she’s very kindly agreed to venture onto this site to bring you all your lunch. Don’t give her any hassle, OK?”
    The men laughed and then nodded. “Sure, Alex. You’re the boss.”
    Fifteen minutes later it seemed that all of the team at the development had made their sandwich, crisp and drink selections and sloped off to devour them in the sunshine. Only one of the builders, a portly man who must have been twenty years Kat’s senior, had pushed the boundaries a little, despite Alex’s earlier warning. As he’d selected a smoked salmon and cream cheese roll – a choice that had surprised Kat somewhat, having pegged him as a ham and cheese kind of guy – he’d asked Kat if she’d fancy joining him for a drink sometime. She’d politely declined his offer, saying that she had a boyfriend. No need to tell him that, technically, she and Nathan were no longer an item. No need to tell him why either.
    Just as Kat slammed the van doors shut, Alex re-appeared from his office.
    “Thanks, Kat. I hope none of them caused any trouble?” he asked, taking off his yellow hard hat and running a hand through cropped dark brown hair in an agitated fashion.
    “No, they were all fine.” Kat forced a smile, struggling to tuck an escaped tendril of curly blond hair back into her ponytail. God, it was hot today. “Thanks for being so gentlemanly about their behaviour.”
    He grinned back at her. “No problem. I know what they can be like and as soon as I saw you getting out of the van I thought I’d better intervene. I’ve had enough problems getting a company to even contemplate coming to this site without them scaring you off on the first day.”
    “Problems? Why do you think that is?” asked Kat, sensing an opportunity to make sure this man was fully aware just how much the people of Luisborough were still against the development.
    “Because they hate us around here,” he said, shrugging matter-of-factly.
    “And that doesn’t bother you?” Kat was now leaning against the van, noting that Alex seemed, somehow, a bit different to the rest of the team on the site. He had a jaded air about him despite the fact that he was clearly much younger than most of the others. Kat couldn’t help noticing that he was also extremely good looking.
    “Yes, it bothers me but what can you do?” He sighed. “A job’s a job in this day and age. We all have to make a living, don’t we?”
    Softening a little towards him, Kat nodded and rolled her eyes. “Tell me about it.”
    He moved to stand next to her, propping himself against the van. Kat hadn’t realised until that moment just how tall he was. “Take you, for instance. I can’t imagine it was your lifelong ambition to drive around in a van with that name on the side of it. You must get no end of grief.”
    “I do but I need to earn some money to get my life back on track, so here I am.”
    “Is this your first job?” he asked, setting his hat and clipboard on the roof of the van and looking at her intently.
    “Pretty much. I recently finished a degree in environmental science and geography at university.” She added, trying to sound optimistic, “I’m waiting for my dream job to come along. In the meantime I work at the deli for a pittance and spend the rest of my time volunteering in a charity shop in town.”
    “Dream job, eh?” He turned towards her, brown eyes looking at her in a genuinely interested way. “What would your dream job be, then?”
    Kat smiled. “That’s easy. I’d love to work on a project like a nature reserve. Helping to preserve the environment, look after the wildlife. The charity shop where I volunteer is the Save the World one. My boss there, Summer, is a good friend and a great campaigner against developments like this.”
    Aware that she was telling him things that she hadn’t really spoken to anyone about since Nathan, she quickly turned away. He was a complete stranger. A stranger who stood for everything she was against. He was the enemy, supervising the building of a development that she, and many others, had fought to try to prevent.
    Reaching onto the van roof to hand the hat and clipboard back to Alex, she said, “I’d better be going.”
    “Sure. Thanks for coming out here.” He started to walk away but then paused, turned back towards her and added, “See you tomorrow, then?”
    Kat nodded. As she drove off, she felt more flustered than when she’d arrived. Unfortunately she had a growing suspicion that it had nothing to do with the hot weather or having to bring food to the development against her will. Rather, she suspected, it had much more to do with meeting Alex the site manager. Not a good sign at all.

    Author Bio and links
    Author bio
    Zanna Mackenzie lives in the East Midlands in the UK with her husband, 4 dogs, a vegetable patch that’s home to far too many weeds and an ever expanding library of books waiting to be read.
    Being a freelance writer and editor of business publications is her ‘day job’ but, at every opportunity, she can be found scribbling down notes on scenes for whatever novel she’s working on. She loves it when the characters in her novels take on minds of their own and start deviating from the original plot!
    Formerly a travel agent and therapist (she has qualifications in clinical aromatherapy, crystal healing, naturopathic nutrition and herbalism) she loves walking the dogs and gardening – that’s when she’s not writing or reading!
    Zanna has written two novels, The Love Programme and How Do You Spell Love?

    Find out more about Zanna at:
    www.zannamackenzie.blogspot.co.uk
    www.zannamackenzie.co.uk
    Twitter: @ZannaMacKenzie
    Facebook: www.facebook.com/zanna. mackenzie
    Goodreads - http://www.goodreads.com/user/show/10703273-zanna-mackenzie

  • TODAY IS RELEASE DAY!!!! Saint Sloan... :) Cover Reveal

    TODAY IS RELEASE DAY!!!! Saint Sloan... :) Cover Reveal

    I'm so excited! Today is the release day for my second novel, SAINT SLOAN. I can't believe I'm a multi-published author!!! (are you kidding me?!?!?!)

    I'll be at work today (late because we are having a long faculty meeting) and I won't be home to add the buy links to this post. When I DO get home, I will. If you are interested in finding it for yourself, please do... IF you do, please put them in the comments so others can see them :)

    Also, on facebook Friday night from 7:30-9:30 pm central time, I'm having a SAINT SLOAN release party. There will be games, prizes, and me... YOU ARE ALL INVITED :) https://www.facebook.com/events/501488796581760/

    Tomorrow, I'll have my 'how I got published' story up on this blog. Next week, I'm having a blog tour :) Busy, Busy.

    And here's the moment I've been waiting months for... I can now show you the cover of SAINT SLOAN (eep!).

    Saint Sloan by Kelly Martin

    When Sloan Bridges is seventeen years and three hundred, sixty-four days old, her dream of having a perfect birthday is shattered. Home alone after spending the afternoon working on a science project at the new boy’s house, Sloan is brutally attacked in her kitchen by a man she can’t recognize. The only clue she has to go on is what he whispers in her ear, “You deserve this.”
    The police have one suspect—Aaron Hunter, older brother of ‘the new boy’, who picked Sloan up a few nights before as she ran from a party. Adamant that he didn’t do it, Aaron begs Sloan to believe him. For her part, Sloan doesn’t know who to trust. She never saw her attacker’s face, and when she does picture it, it’s Aaron’s face she sees standing over her.
    Trying to move on is impossible with a former best friend who taunts her and gives her the moniker, “Saint Sloan”, an ex-boyfriend who doesn’t understand why she changed a few months before her attack, and Aaron’s brother, Ray, who makes Sloan smile but has a side she doesn’t understand.
    With her attacker ready to strike again, Sloan has to figure out who would hurt her and stop him before he finishes what he started.
    Happy birthday to her…
    BUY LINKS: AMAZON: COMING SOON-- PLEASE CHECK THROUGHOUT THE DAY BARNES AND NOBLE: COMING SOON-- PLEASE CHECK THROUGHOUT THE DAY ASTRAEA PRESS-- http://www.astraeapress.com/#!/~/product/category=662245&id=20839143
    Kelly's Amazon Author Page: http://www.amazon.com/Kelly-Martin/e/B009O5CZL4/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_pop_1
    Find me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/martieKay
    And facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Kelly-Martin-Author/136506059763138

  • "What is Love?" Week 1

    "What is Love?" Week 1

    What is Love? 1 Corinthians 13:1-13
    A Bible Study /Series
    Introduction: Week 1
    Romans 13:10 Love does no wrong to others so love fulfills the requirements of God’s law.

    Welcome to the "What is Love?" Bible Study! I’m so excited that you chose (yes you CHOSE) to join in this venture with me.

    I'm going to be honest with you, I had most of this written. Well, all of it is written, but some of it is typed. A few weeks ago, God said, "Rewrite it." (Yeah, THAT was awesome ;) ) Ok, I had worked on this for months... and God wanted it re-written.
    Oh. MY!
    I wanted to know why, of course, and I believe it is because I was trying to make it too 'formal'. I had written it like I 'thought' a 'bible study' should be written... not like how *I* write, and not how God wanted it (Sorry... )
    SO, bear with me. We are going to go with the bones of the old-- but add new on top of it. We are going to learn together-- informally. If you have a question, post it (either here on on my facebook page). If you have a comment, write it. If you want to discuss something, let us have it :) I know this is 'online' and we can't see each other, but we can learn so much by interaction. Lets really take time to discuss this. To learn about it, and at the end of the 12 weeks, we *SHOULD* be able to answer the question, "What is Love?"
    So, you may be asking yourself, "What have I clicked on?"
    Well... for the next 12 weeks, I'm going to post about 1 Corinthians 13. We are going to take the entire book and dissect it verse by verse (combining a few of them) and REALLY see what love is, how we are supposed to love, and what else God has in store for us while studying it.
    If you have no idea what you’ve gotten yourself into, you’re not alone. When I started this, it was only intended (by me) to be at most a 3 part series on marriage. However, the more I learned… the more I studied….the more God put on my heart…the more I realized how MUCH there is to learn from this ONE chapter in the Bible. And its not all for married people! I realize that these verses are quoted at many weddings, but the kind of love it talks about spans the gamut of relationships.
    Husband/Wife
    Parent/Child
    You/Neighbors
    You/Enemies
    Oh yes! Even our enemies! (Ouch)

    We are to love them all, and this Bible Study in intended to give us the tools to do that.

    When I thought of love, to be very honest with you, the first thing that popped into my mind is the movie Moulin Rouge. Now, I know it might not be the best thing to start the first day of my first Bible Study with the movie Moulin Rouge. But, hey, it serves the purpose.
    Moulin Rouge is classified as a “Love Stor y”, however it really starts out as a ‘Lust Story’. The rich guy lusts for the high priced –prostitute—and so does the penniless sitar player. He does eventually fall in love with her—but ‘lust’ ends up causing her death (sorry for the spoiler if you haven’t seen it yet….)

    The point of this is not to recommend Moulin Rouge, but instead to start off this series by understanding the differences between love and lust.

    Remember, we are trying to answer the question, "What is love?" not "What is Lust?"

    · Lust is of the flesh.
    · Love is of the heart .
    · Lust can get us in trouble.
    · Love can get us out of it.
    · Lust is ONLY physical.
    · Love is physical, emotional and spiritual.
    Love, actual love for others, is what Paul spent an entire chapter discussing—in detail.
    Paul (the writer of Corinthians) was not a married man—and he seemed to like it that way (1 Corinthians 7:8—So I say to those who aren’t married and to widows—its better to stay unmarried, just as I am.) However, he understood love. True love. Christian Love.

    THAT is the kind of love we will be studying about.
    Now, I’d like to take this opportunity to emphasis something. We aren’t perfect. We will never be able to achieve ‘Perfect True Love’. With God’s help, we can try. But we are human. We will fail. And God knows that. He understands that.

    So, you might be asking yourself ‘Why are we studying this if we won’t be able to totally achieve it?”

    That’s a good and valid question. We are supposed to try to live and love like Christ did. We know we won’t be able to do it completely because we aren’t Him. However, we are to strive to more like Jesus ( 1 John 4:17 And as we live in God, our love grows more perfect. So we will not be afraid on the day of judgment, but we can face him with confidence because we live like Jesus here in this world.).

    Paul wanted us to strive to truly love everyone. He knew we’d have problems with it that’s why he gave us instructions on how to do it.

    It won’t be easy… and we won’t be perfect… but hopefully through these next weeks together, we will gain the tools so we can love more patiently and with more kindness, etc.

    So… what are our goals for this Bible Study/Series?
    · To learn tools to use in our lives to show love
    · To find out who we are supposed to love
    · To gain knowledge of “What IS love?”
    · To gain knowledge of the Bible through verse finds and daily “homework”

    So! Are you still with me!? I hope so! I’m so excited and ready to get these discussions underway! I want this to be an interactive study, so please join in. All you need is: a pencil or pen, notebook, and Bible. You can use any version of the Bible. My personal Bible is a New Living Translation version.

    For the next 12 weeks, I am committed to bringing you the Series the Lord put on my heart to present.. I’m praying for each participant—that this touches you in some way. Please, make the commitment with me to participate, learn, and study with me to see what God has in store for us.

    Ready?
    I know I am!!!!
    "So, Kelly, now that I'm all reved up, what happens next? Why do I have a notebook (that you have talked about for 2 months... )?"
    I'm so glad you asked ;)

    Each week I’ll post the lesson with 6 verses at the end. The verses are for the next week’s post so you will be ready and up to date. I recommend using the SOAP method each day with the verses.

    SOAP stands for Scripture, Observe, Apply, Pray. It is a great way to study each individual verse and see how something that was written thousands of years ago…. Applies to you today.

    Example: 1 Tim 1:5~
    *S*cripture 1 Timothy 1:5 The purpose of my instruction is that all believers would be filled with love that comes from a pure heart, a clear conscious, and genuine faith.
    *O*bservation: Everyone that believes in God need to be taught (instructed) on how to be filled with and use love that comes from a pure heart, clear conscious, and genuine faith.
    *A*pply: I need to make sure that I learn how to love genuinely. I need to strive to have a pure heart and a clear conscious, and if I don’t, I need to pray about it.
    *P*ray: God, please forgive me of my sins. I know that do don’t always have the purest heart or the clearest of conscience…. And sometimes genuine faith is overwhelming. However, I want to do that! I want to strive to be filled with love. I want to be instructed and in turn instruct others on how to do it.
    In Jesus name I pray, Amen

    *THAT* is the SOAP method and that’s the tool that I recommend you use for your daily verses in your notebook. If you don’t want to do it that way, that’s fine, but I do know that the SOAP method does help you understand the Bible Verses better.
    Another great idea (or something I like to do) is to write the verses in my own words. That way it is in language I can understand and I know that I've gotten the meaning out of it. Which every way (or even something different) that you want to do, will be awesome. One of our goals is to learn-- and everyone learns differently. (That's the teacher coming out in me lol)
    Sometimes throughout the Monday post, you will see these Q. That symbol means that it is a question that I’d like for you to answer in your notebook.
    Ok, I’ve talked enough. If you have any questions, please leave a comment below or ask on the facebook page. I’m asking that if you are participating in this, that you do leave a comment below and you do follow the facebook page NOT because I want more hits, but because I TRULY WANT you to LEARN from this and comments will make us accountable and the daily discussions on facebook will keep this study on our minds daily. Plus I genuinely want to know what is on your mind as we go through these next 12 weeks together. It's gonna be lonely if you don't...

    Here we go...

    Friends, here are our first verses to start this Bible Study. Our first 'official' week of finding out "What is Love?"

    Verses for Week 2:
    Tuesday: 1 Timothy 1:5

    Wednesday: Romans 13:9

    Thursday: Galatians 5:14

    Friday: Leviticus 19:18

    Saturday: 1 Corinthians 13:1 (the first verse of our Series)
    Sunday: REVIEW all verses for TOMORROW's post.
    Thank you so much for showing interest in this study and I pray that it touches you-- that you learn something-- and that you have a great time. :)
    Much love, Kelly
    Linked with: Women Living Well Wednesday and Encouraging Words Wednesday and Best of 2011 Blog Hop

  • My Top 5 Favorite Kid Shows

    I'm going to admit that I love Kid shows.

    Love.

    I was actually getting sad the other day thinking about when my kids won't like to watch them any more.

    What will I do?

    Sneak and watch them on youtube when they go to bed?

    Umm... (Lets not discuss what is blasting in my headphones right now, shall we... )

    I thought I'd list my Top 5 FAVORITE kid shows. There is no real point to it really. Well, there is... I want to share the awesomeness of these shows if you haven't seen them before (and truth be told, if you have small kids, you probably have).

    I had 4 things I ranked these shows on (YES, I went that far with it lol).

    1). Watchability-- for parents
    **in this world where we don't have a lot of time to spend with our kids because of other responsibilities, it's a good thing when a tv show is actually interesting for both the kid and the child. That way you can watch together, talk about it, and learn lessons together.

    2). Educational
    **Sponge Bob will not be on my top 5 list (Spoiler alert!). Not that he's evil or anything.. just that he's not all that educational. I like my kids to learn from their shows... and not just about Krusty Krabs.

    3.) Entertaining
    **This goes back to the watchability. There are some shows that are educational, but boring as mud (well, mud would probably be more fun).

    4). No Whining Kids/Animated characters
    ** My kids imitate what they see on tv. They do little plays for me etc. And sometimes they deal with conflicts like the characters on the shows do... which is good... except... for the fact that they have to do the 'bad' thing before the conflict occurs. Which means, I have to hear the 'whining'. And whining, even if it's fake whining, can grate your nerves. Plus, I don't think it teaches a very good lesson on getting what you want.

    SO, those are MY criteria for judging my top 5. It's, of course, my own opinion. Don't shoot the messanger...

    My Top 5 Favorite Kid Shows (on right now)... preschool Moms, be ready to nod... or go "Really?"

    1. WordGirl (PBS)
    WordGirl chronicals the life of Becky Boxford. She's a 5th grader by day, superhero by night. Becky is actually from the planet Lexicon and arrived on Earth at age 2 when her spaceship crash landed (oh yes, you heard that right).

    I love WordGirl because it gives wonderful vocabulary lessons, has interesting stories... and a monkey named Captain Huggy Face... How can that be wrong?

    Here is a snippet...

    Love...

    2. The Fresh Beat Band (Nick Jr.)
    Now... this used to be my favorite show (yes, I admit it... I also admit to listening to their song "Here We Go"... right at this very moment. And my kids are asleep. Yes... I know). They only slipped to second because... well... my kids aren't much on Nick Jr. right now. They are all about PBS and I haven't got to see much of them lately. That, and they pulled a Darrin with Marina. Grrrr... I have more thoughts on The Fresh Beat Band, but to leave myself any ounce of credibility intact, I shall restrain myself.

    Instead, here is a snippet...

    3. The Electric Company (PBS)
    The original show started about 30 years ago. I remember it from when I was little. I love watching this new Re-boot with my girls. They love the dancing, singing, and *gasp* learning. They make reading fun and that is challenging. The stories are interesting. The lessons are really well laid out. It's just a great show.

    Here is a clip...

    
    4. Super Why (PBS) (Can you tell we watch a lot of PBS? lol)
    In Storybook Village, Wyatt and his 3 friends solve problems using the "Power to Read". You have 'Alpha Pig' with Alphabet Power. Princess Presto with Spelling Power. Wonder Red with Word Power. And SuperWhy with the Power to Read... AND, of course, SuperYou. It covers all of the basis, is fun, doesn't get *too* old, and has great messages.

    5. WordWorld (PBS) WordWorld is a place... where words come alive. Each animal, house, tree, log, bowl, etc, is made up of letters which spell that word. When they want to make something new, they just find the letters and put them together. It shows words in concrete forms. A C... A... T... can spell cat. But seeing it together, letters and animal, makes it more real. I really like WordWorld.
    And... here ya go...

    AND there ya go. My top 5 favorite kid shows. Sorry, this seemed to be a promotion for PBS lol, but we have started watching a lot of it.
    OH, honorable Mention... The baby loves Sid the Science Kid :)
    What 'kid shows' do you love? (YES, I said YOU) What shows do your kids like? What do you look for in a quality kids show? Share your comments. :) I'd love to hear them.
    Much Love, Kelly

  • Writerly Quotes: Character Backstory

    Writerly Quotes: Character Backstory

    ©Stina Lindenblatt

    With NaNoWriMo starting next week, I thought I’d pull out some quotes from my pile of writing craft books to help get you ready. Today, I’m focusing on character backstory.

    A character flaw is a coping mechanism that arises from the loss of an original state of perfection that occurred in the character’s backstory. Her flaw is designed to compensate for a perceived vulnerability, sense of insecurity, and feeling threatened. No matter how confident, every major character demonstrates lessons learned from the wound inflicted in her backstory that is now lodged in her core belief system.

    The Plot Whisperer: Secrets of Story Structure Any Writer Can Master by Martha Alderson

    Backstory is just that—everything that happened before the story began—and is such it is the raw material from which all flashbacks are drawn. So what’s the difference between a flashback and waving in backstory? It’s simple. A flashback, being an actual scene complete with dialogue and action, stops the main storyline; weaving in backstory doesn’t. Backstory is, in fact, part of the present.

    Neatly woven in, backstory is a mere snippet, a fragment of memory, or even an attitude born of something that happened in the past and runs through the protagonist’s mind as he experiences, and evaluates, what is happening to him in the present.

    Wired For Story: The Writer’s Guide to Using Brain Science to Hook Readers from the Very First Sentence by Lisa Cron

    Now, I want you to think about your backstory, the series of events that led up to your goals and dilemmas. Think about the TV series Lostand how it weaves in moments of backstory that affect present decisions. What are the moments leading to your pivotal life decisions? This will help you when you think about the backstory of the characters in your writing.

    Story Line: Finding Gold in Your Life Story by Jen Grisanti

    Do you put a lot of time into figuring out your characters’ backstories before writing the first draft?

  • Never Surrender Blogfest

    Never Surrender Blogfest

    This week, Elana Johnson is hosting the Never Surrender Blogfest. All you have to do is blog about a time you didn’t surrender. It can be about anything. It’s not too late to participate and you might even win a prize.

    <<<3

    During my senior year of high school, my guidance counselor told not to bother with university. I would never succeed. Granted, he was partly correct on that assumption. One of my finest achievements was skipping Social Studies 30 and not getting into trouble. Okay, almost not getting into trouble. My grades reflected my lack of enthusiasm in the course. And even though I never skipped English and Math, those grades weren’t looking too hot, either. My strengths definitely lay in the sciences.

    I decided to prove my guidance counselor wrong. I did end up going to university (after I repeated Social Studies and English), and studied like I had never studied before. Okay, I still skipped some of my boring courses, but I worked super hard on the courses that meant more to me. Yep, the science-based ones. Not only did I graduate with a Bachelor of Physical Education (now known as Kinesiology), I went on to do my Master’s of Science degree in exercise physiology, with a focus on energy metabolism. I spent a semester at the University of Jyväskylä (central Finland) and was invited to do my PhD in the department of sport sciences. I decided not to pursue the degree for numerous reasons. My education also resulted in a summer research position with the Defense and Civil Institute of Environmental Medicine (Toronto), where I studied the effect of various drugs on anaerobic performance.

    In the end, I decided I’d rather write novels than research grants (I became a drug rep instead), but I’m so glad I never surrendered when my guidance counselor told me not to bother with university. I would have missed out on so many awesome opportunities, and my educational and research background has been an inspiration for some of my stories.

    Is there a time that you never surrendered(e.g. trained for a marathon, queried agents, studied for an entrance exam)?

  • Choosing the Publication Pathway

    Choosing the Publication Pathway

    More and more fiction writers are joining the growing trend of self publishing. Some have delusions of becoming the next Amanda Hockings (seriously, who wouldn’t want to be her?). Others have realistic expectations and know what it takes to produce an excellent product that will be noticed. These individuals also know that it will take a while to grow their career, just like for most traditional authors. They do their research, and they based their decision to join the ranks because it fits their goals.

    With YA, things aren’t as clear cut as for other genres. There are two types of readers who read YA stories: teens and adults. As we know, teens are not adults. When it comes to adoption of eReaders, nothing is truer. Teens haven’t jumped onto the ebook train like adults have. This, though, is slowly changing.

    When it comes buying books, again, both groups are very different. Teens have less disposable income and most don’t have credit cards. They tend to borrow books from friends and libraries (although there are a lot of teens who do buy books instead of borrowing them). The majority of the YA books sold are being bought by adults. Some are giving them to their kids as gifts. Many are being read by adults who love YA stories.

    So what does this have to do with self publishing? Plenty when it comes to your goals. If you don’t care who reads your books, just as long as someone buys them, then self publishing is a viable option for you. Currently, there are about a dozen self-published YA books that have made it to the top 125 selling children’s chapter books on Amazon. The majority of the books in the top 125 are YA novels.

    However, if you hope teens will read your books because you deal with issues that are important to them (think Speak and Thirteen Reasons Why), then you might want to focus on traditional publishing—for now. With traditional publishing, your books have a greater chance of ending up in public and school libraries (unless they are banned, but that’s a discussion for another day). This means they have a greater chance of being read by teens.

    What YA genres do well self published? Paranormals and science fiction. This could be because they tend to be part of a series, and this is a great way to develop a fan base. These genres do much better than YA contemporary books. The contemporary novels that did well on the list were all through traditional publishers, most notable the big six.

    If you’re interested in self publishing, but you would love teens to read your books, don’t fret. You can take this chance to build your list. That way, you’ll have a solid base when the teens take over as buyers of YA ebooks.

    For more info on YA ebooks, check out the following links:

    Breakdown of YA book sales according to format
    Are teens embracing ebooks?
    Teens on ebooks
    YA Confidential (scroll down for the ebook question)

    Have you figure out what your publication goals are? Have they determined which path you want to take?

    (You don’t have to pick only one route. It’s fine to pursue both paths. It just depends on your goals.)

    <<<3

    YARWA is offering the workshop “author branding in YA.” It will be held online May 14 to 25. For more info, check out this link. You don’t have to be a member to register.

  • Adding Dimension

    Adding Dimension

    ©Stina Lindenblatt

    Dimension. It’s what we seek when creating characters. It can also add interest to your photos.

    In the above picture, I turned off the flash and allowed the lighting from the side to form the shadows and add highlights. The photo was taken at the Exploratorium in San Francisco (my nine year old created the design on one of the science exhibits).

    When shaping your characters, come up with both positive and negative traits. The protagonist will have more positive than negative traits, and the opposite will be true for the antagonist(s). Some positive traits may become negative in certain circumstance (and vice versa).

    Also, give your characters two conflicting desires (wants). By doing this, you will heighten the emotion in your story and add conflict and tension. The “desire” the character decides to pursue at a given time will depend on your character’s motivation and who she is. For example, in The Hunger Games*, Katniss doesn’t want to be picked as a tribune for the games. If she is, the odds of her returning home alive aren’t good. Her other desire is to keep her little sister safe. So when her sister’s name is randomly selected to be a tribune, Katniss’s two desires are put at odds. Her desire to keep her sister safe outweighs her desire not to be a tribune, and she volunteers to take her sister’s place in the games.

    Have you used any of these techniques to add dimension to your characters or photos?

    *The link will take you to The Hunger Games movie trailer.

  • Touring Blogs

    Touring Blogs

    ©Photographer unknown

    Each week, my Blogger dashboard becomes home to whatever blog tour is going on at the time. This made me wonder how effective these tours are.

    This isn’t a scientific survey. I haven’t come up with a null hypothesis. I won’t be performing any fancy statistical analysis. And I’m not presenting my results at a conference. Been there. Done that. No thanks.

    But I am curious as to what others think about them. Don’t worry, this won’t be painful. Nothing like what I made my research subjects endure when I did my Master’s of Science thesis [insert evil cackle here].

    If you have any additional comments, I’d love to hear them, especially what you love and don’t love about blog tours. Are there certain types of posts you like better (interviews, reviews, other)? I’ll be discussing the results next week.

    (Note: unfortunately the questions are too long for my blog design, so I've also listed them below.)

    1. Do you voluntarily read posts involved in a blog tour? (I’m not talking about reading a post just because someone commented on yours).

    2. Have you bought a book you saw on a blog tour, and you hadn’t already planned to buy the book before the tour started?

    3. Have you bought a book you saw on a blog tour, but before the tour started, you were sitting on the fence about buying the book?

    4. Have you ever changed your mind about buying a book after you read a post on the blog tour? (i.e. you were going to buy the book but then decided not to.)

    Chocolate kisses to all who filled in the poll. Remember, the answers are anonymous. I have no idea who you are, so you can be completely honest.

    <<<3

    This weekend is Canadian Thanksgiving. There won’t be a post on Friday, but I’ll be back Monday.

  • I Believe . . .

    I Believe . . .

    ©Stina Lindenblatt
    How many of you have experienced a moment of ‘Why the hell am I doing this to myself?’ when it comes to your writing? It’s that feeling we often get after a beta reader or crit partner transforms our manuscript into an ocean of red, or when we receive rejection after rejection from agents.
    But it shouldn’t be this way.
    When I was in high school, seniors were required to see the guidance counselor to discuss their future plans. Do you know what mine said? “Don’t waste your time with university. You’ll never succeed.” I proved him wrong. Not only did I go onto university, I earned my Masters of Science degree in exercise biological sciences (specializing in energy metabolism). No easy feat, I might add.
    So what happened? How could he have been so wrong? Because I took what he said as a challenge and worked my ass off to succeed. You no doubt have a similar story about how you wanted something so badly, you pushed yourself hard to achieve it.
    Next time you feel like a failure when it comes to your writing, remember your previous glowing moment. Then challenge yourself to push your writing to the next level. Figure out what your weaknesses are. Is it characterization? Plotting? The writing itself? Then study craft books, go to a workshop, or do an online course. Do whatever you need to do to grow as a writer.
    But most importantly of all, believe in yourself. Remember your triumphant successes and know you’ll do it again, but this time with your writing career.
    How do you deal with the horrible ‘Why the hell am I doing this to myself’ feeling?

  • Branding is Your Power

    Branding is Your Power

    If I were to ask you what your author brand is, could you tell me?

    I’d heard the term before, but until I recently read social media guru Kristen Lamb’s blog, I hadn’t given mine much thought.

    According to the Oxford Dictionary, a brand is “an identifying marked burned on livestock or (especially in former times) criminals or slaves with a branding iron.”

    Oh, wait! Sorry. Wrong definition. You don’t need to rush off to your local ranch and ask them to burn a symbol on your butt. I mean you can if you want, but it’s probably not recommended. And I’m not sure how effective it would be for selling your novel.

    Anyway, after checking my old marketing textbook, I decided to skip on sharing its super dry definition. Instead, I consulted a number of great resources on author brands. And of course, they all had differing opinions as to what it means. But here’s the basic gist of them.

    What’s in a Name?

    The first thing you need to consider is your name. According to Kristen Lamb, this is your brand. Because of this, she recommends your name is in your blog’s URL. Mine is. Is yours? She also suggests your name is in the title of your blog. Okay, I fail on that point. And until I started writing this post, I didn’t realize my name wasn’t even on my blog. #majorbrandingfail. It’s now in my sidebar.

    What’s Your Niche?

    Shelli Johannes Wells talked about the author brand during WriteOnCon last year. The writer brand describes how people view you based on your books. Maybe you write YA paranormals. Great. But so do so many other YA writers. What differentiates your style from someone else’s?

    For example, Kiersten White (Paranormalcy) writes humorous YA paranormals. When we pick up her books, that’s what we expect. Problem with this is what will happen if her next series is much darker? (btw I’d still buy it since I love dark paranormals).

    Do you have a style you like to write in? Maybe humorous, dark, or suspenseful. If you blog, can you incorporate your style into your blog? Lisa and Laura Roecker are a perfect example of this. Their witty, entertaining voice captures the hearts of their blog followers. And you can expect the same from their novel, The Liar Society.

    Who Are You?

    Author Roni Loren explained that your book and genre are only part of your author brand. The real you is the other part. What does this mean?

    Be yourself.

    Of course if the real you is rude and obnoxious, then you might be headed for trouble. One hundred years ago it wouldn’t have been a big deal. Now thanks to social networking, it can be your ultimate doom, especially if editors discover this (and they will) before they offer you a contract.

    Shelli Johannes Wells also covered this in more detail during WriteOnCon.

    Obviously these three things aren’t as clear cut as they sound. What happens if you’re published in several different genres? When you say Stephenie Meyer, most people think of sparkling vampires. But she also wrote a successful adult science fiction novel (The Host). This is why a number of authors, such as Nora Roberts, write different genres under different pen names. Each one has a different author brand associated with it, but she’s still Nora Roberts.

    Before you freak out at the thought of having more than one brand, Meg Cabot and Richelle Mead both write YA and adult novels, and each has only one brand.

    So what about you, do you have an author brand? Is this something you’re considering, or are you going to wait to be published first?

  • Inside The Teenage Brain

    Inside The Teenage Brain

    Last week, I talked about how teen logic and adult logic are not the same. This is an important distinction to make when you write for teens, as two of my commenters pointed out.

    Riv Re: As a teen myself, I hate reading a book written about an adult in a teen's body. You're totally right, about the logic and emotions of it.

    Alyssa Kirk: Also, you're right about teen logic. Myself (and all teens) can spot an unauthentic teen voice immediately and those are the books I usually don't finish.

    In the book Inside the Teenage Brain, Sheryl Feinstein describes the remodelling the brain undergoes during adolescence. I’m not going to go into the neuroscience of it, though I do recommend reading the book. Sheryl does a great job explaining it in layman’s terms, and it really is fascinating.

    When it comes to making decisions, teens use a different part of their brains compared to adults. Teens rely on the amygdale, which is the emotional center of the brain. Adults use their frontal lobes, which is the last part of the brain to be developed during adolescence. This is the logical part of the brain. The part that knows the difference between a good decision and a bad one.

    A few other points to remember:

    • There’s a huge difference between the brain of a twelve year old and the brain of a seventeen year old.

    • "The teenage brain is designed for misunderstandings and misinterpretations" (page 19). Perfect for YA writers, not so great for parents.

    • Impulse control develops with age. So a twelve-year-old’s self-control is going to be less than that for an older teen.

    • Younger teens say one thing and then do something else, instead.

    • "Teens believe they are indestructible" (page 31). Don’t believe me. Think teenage boys and cars.

    • The teenage brain has the delightful (not) way of making teens feel like they’re the only ones to experience something. When a girl says to her mother: “You don’t understand. You’ve never been in love.” She actually believes it. Again, great for YA writers.

    • "Older teens can better logically follow an argument than can younger teens" (page 51).

    • "The emotional part of the brain doesn’t reach maturation until the person is about twenty years old" (page 51). Personally, I don’t think I’ve even reached this point. Maybe that’s why I can write YA.

    Does this mean you can’t have a character who is logical? No, it doesn’t. Everyone is different. Our experiences, personalities, interests all play a role in who we are and our ability to solve problems. The point is to remain true to your characters and don’t treat them like they're mini-adults. They aren’t. Even a teen who is forced to take over the adult roles in the family, for whatever reason, is still not an adult. Her emotions will still play a role in the decision-making process, though maybe not to the same extent as for another teen.

    Remember, teens want to read about believable teen characters. They don’t want to read about adults masquerading as teens. And they know when something feels real and when something's contrived.

    Any additional thoughts, suggestions, or comments?

    (And yes, parents, I highly recommended the book. There’s some great advice on how to make to most of the developing brain and to help your teen through those rough years. It’s the best book I’ve seen on the topic.)

  • Gotta Love That Research

    Gotta Love That Research

    I love research. I have a Master’s of Science in exercise biological sciences ’cause I love it so much. But doing research for my novels is by far my favorite type so far. There’s a whole world out there begging for you to dive in and explore it.

    For my current project, Lost in a Heartbeat (YA contemporary), I investigated the world of dream analysis and animal symbolism. I also poured through books on jewellery design (not that I’m planning to take up the hobby). Oh, and then there was the research on sprained wrists, drowning, and competitive swimming. And don’t forget those YA books I’ve read with similar themes to what I’m writing.

    And yes, I loved every minute of it.

    The downside? The librarian now thinks I’ve been raped, my husband abuses me, my teenage daughter is struggling with depression, and one of my children has leukemia. Betcha she’s missed all the books I’ve borrowed on writing fiction. I’m thinking of having a T-shirt made saying, “Research is the Fiction Writer’s Best Friend.” What do you think?

    But say you’ve come up with a great idea for a story, what comes next? For me, I start off with the basic research. For Lost in a Heartbeat, a story about a teenage girl who has to find the courage to return to competitive swimming after she was raped, I began by searching for associations that deal with rape. RAINN.org (Rape, Abuse & Incest National Network) is a great resource for both the rape survivor and her loved ones. I also borrowed books on the topic from the library. Not all rape survivors deal with rape in exactly the same way, which was important to know when I worked on the characterization for my protagonist.

    What’s next? For me, I prefer to outline my novels instead of writing as I go. Everyone, though, is different. As I started to plan the book, I came up with the idea of using dream analysis and animal symbolism to further the plot. Google is a great search engine for that. Just be careful of the information you decide to go with. Depending on what you’re writing about, you want to make sure the source is credible. Wikipedia is a great resource but it isn’t without errors. Maybe you know someone who’s an expert in the subject and you can interview them. If you have a medical or psychological question pertaining to your novel, you can contact H.L. Dyer (paediatrician) and Carolyn Kaufman (charter psychologist) at the Query Tracker Blog. They're a tremendous resource.

    And for those of you interesting in writing fantasy and paranormal novels, do you really have to do research? Isn’t it all make believe, anyway? Maybe. But even Stephenie Meyer did extensive research on vampire myths when writing the Twilight Saga. And Melissa Marr is knowledgeable about fairy lore.

    Want some great tips on researching for your current or next project? Be sure to check out this link and this link from the Query Tracker Blog.

    Remember, even though you’re writing fiction—as in made up—the details are important, as are the credible facts. And you never know, your research may spark an idea for another book.

    Have a great week!

  • Attack of the Killer Virus

    Attack of the Killer Virus

    No, I wasn’t attacked by the H1N1 virus. But my computer was hit by something equally deadly as far as my documents were concerned. Unfortunately, the computer tech guys weren’t able to save them. Not a single one.

    Okay, I know, if I had protected my computer with an anti-viral software in the first place, I wouldn’t be in this sorry state. My husband had complained it slowed the Internet too much—and it did—so we didn’t renew it. And it’s not like he had anything important on the computer. Just me.

    However, I’m pretty smart—I have a Master’s of Science degree to back up that claim—or maybe I’m just paranoid, but I did backup everything important. Almost everything important. Unfortunately, the super cool shots I had taken during my vacation, which were destined for this blog (as in this week’s post), were a casualty of this misadventure. We had only returned home a few days before, and I hadn’t had a chance, yet, to save them beyond the computer. Oh well. It could have been worse.

    So the lesson here is to backup your stuff frequently because you never know when disaster might hit. For my manuscripts, I save them whenever I’m finished working on them for the session on a flashcard and on my email account. If I’m writing for a few hours, then I back them up hourly on my flashcard. Paranoid? Maybe. But can you blame me?

    Well, I’m off now to plot a new novel. Edward Cullen (Twilight, as if you didn’t know) is going to decide he’s sick of being a veggie vampire. His first human meal? The creators of computer viruses. I sense a bestseller here.

    So the question for you. When was the last time you backed up your stuff? And remember, destruction comes in all shapes and forms, and not just the viral kind.